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Devotion

“Goodnight,” he whispered, kissing her softly.

Juliana slept through it. So beautiful, with those long black curls and that delicate bone structure. How had a loser like him ever managed to snag this angel?

She’d rejected his first proposal, and his second. But eventually his persistence paid off. Their first night together, he carried her over the threshold, and they made love. After, he cried. Juliana never judged him for his tears.

The next morning, she let him put her in a dress which he’d picked out for her, and burn the clothes in which her family had buried her.

The Necklace

It’s so hard to squeeze a story into a hundred words or less. I didn’t quite make this one fit, but I’m tired. I’m sure that I’m just putting too much plot in these things. I can’t help it, I love plot, plot is my favorite. I need to make the moments smaller. I’ll have to try again.

 

 

“I ran away from my daughter, from responsibility. Please find her. Give her this.”

One trembling hand touched her necklace.

“Maybe she’ll have pity, and understand that I was afraid…”

Her speech faded and she wilted into her pillow, eyes nearly shut, thin breaths slowing down.

Finally, the increased morphine had taken effect. The doctor was free to continue his rounds.

She died after he went home.

By the time he returned to work the next day, her body and the necklace were long gone.

Oh well. It’d be better if the girl grew up without reminders of her irresponsible mother anyway. After all, he’d been abandoned as a child by his mother, and he was a successful doctor now.

The Man with the Flat Cap

Flash fiction again.

 

The Man with the Flat Cap

She sat looking out the cafe window at the cold white Christmas lights and tried to remember who she was. Her husband gone. All alone.

Her coffee was cold. She didn’t care. She sat and stared at the lights, longing to be one of them, to not feel anymore.

Something passed in front of them, obliterating her view in dark shadow.

Fuck it.

She got up and paid, leaving her coffee on the table.

 

She walked to her car when a chill swept under her skin, colder than the cutting winter wind. She turned and saw a man with a flat cap silhouetted, a dark shadow against the lights.

Although she couldn’t be sure, he seemed to be following her. She shuddered and walked faster.

Straining to hear his footsteps behind her, to keep track of how close he was, she hurried to her car. With trembling hands she unlocked the door and climbed in. Slamming the door shut and locking it, she peered out, but the man was gone.

She felt silly. But glad to be safe.

Why didn’t she hear his footsteps?

Shaken, she pulled her gloves out of her pocket, dropped one on the floor under her seat, reached for it.

In the dim glow of the lights, she saw something else under the seat.

Her husband’s flat cap.

She realized that terror she’d felt was the first time in a month she’d been glad to be alive.

She chuckled at his sense of humor. He was always one for pranks. And she didn’t feel so alone anymore.

Something metallic lightly tapped her window.

She glanced up and into the face of the man who had been following her. He was grinning at her, all brown mangled teeth, and tapping on her window with a knife.

She screamed, started the car, and veered away, leaving the man in the street, laughing hysterically under the cold white lights.

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