Use your words
Write it bigger
Pace it faster
Happy ending or disaster?
Raise the diction
Cut the laughter
USE
YOUR
WORDS.
That’s too sappy
More emotion
Lust or love or bland devotion?
In a park or at the ocean?
Use
your
words.
Change perspectives
Try relating
Art?
Or mental masturbating?
Ask your friends to give a rating
Use
your
words.
Loved this – great flowing verses! Glad to see you again 🙂
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Love it, Sarah! Love the tempo, love the energy! You are amazing as always. Patricia ❤
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Fantastic piece Sarah, and all sound advice!
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